For my next paper, paper 2, I am going to start by working on my thesis and making it a bit longer. Something I can branch off a bit more. Doing this will give me a bit more structure for my paper. I’m also going to work on introducing the authors of the article’s I used. I’m going to make sure they are not my opening sentences to my body paragraphs. I will also converse with the authors better than I was before. By doing this my transitions will be smoother and the flow of my paper will be much nicer. I’m going to make sure this paper is very structured and make sure that it has a good flow. I feel like my biggest challenge may be repeativeness. Just elaborating what I’m saying over and over. I’m going to make sure I have points I want to cover and that they are covered properly. The points should be somewhat related but have different meanings. I feel like this peer review we did was useful. I did like the group one though because we got a bunch of different people’s opinions and to see if they had the same things that I needed to fix. It is interesting though trying new ways of peer review. I felt like I got some good feedback and I’m excited to fix it up and make it sound good!
My Peer Review
You make consistent and meaningful suggestions in this peer review. Well done. I love that you specifically suggest a source your peer might use. Keep those specifics coming!