Metaphors surround us, they take part in our everyday lives and they help us to understand things better. People find describing one object as another useful for getting the meaning. Metaphors don’t just survive in our everyday casual lives, they also live in our medical lives, the lives that are a little more sensitive and real. Metaphors can break us, help us, or put things into reality when we are in shock. When often diagnosed with a chronic or terminal illness, metaphors may be used to present and describe the next days, months, year, or lifetime. The physical health of a person can be affected by a metaphor, but what some people don’t know is that the mental health can also be affected by a metaphor positively or negatively.
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I agree with your intro, and I really like how you set it up. In my intro I’m heading in the same direction. I think metaphors have a effect on us and it can be good or bad.
1) How metaphors effect us in our daily lives., positively or negatively.
2) How they effect us daily, how they are used in the medical community mentally and physically, and positive and negative effects.
3) Positive and negative effects of metaphors in the medical field mentally and physically.
4)Discusses how metaphors can effect people mentality and physically.
5)Metaphors effect us all either mentally or physically, using them in the medical community has a large impact.
6)Yes, you are addressing the prompt very well, you add all aspects of it and create a introduction that touches each point and clearly state your thesis.
Great job!